Video Critique 9

This looks pretty good, but it looks mechanical. I think he/she could make this seem more fluid if he/she could figure out a way to make things happen together. Right now, it seems like each element happens one after the other...maybe he/she could make the animations overlap a little more. Maybe you could add a slight bulge or turbulent displace to the people hold hands as it zooms in. Adding slight distortions to effects makes them appear more fluid.