Video Critique 3

Amadeus tittle sequence from Rachel Levine on Vimeo.




The flow of the type in those instrument is awkward, especially the way it fade out of the composition. I would rather let it stay there and let it disappear with the instrument it self. That way people's eyes could focus more on the image on the background. The movement of the image on the background is also not consistence, some is moving nicely, but some are moving weird such as at frame 0:40 as an example, the head and elbow of the lady is moving at the same time.