Listing Error and Difficulty in leaning After Effect

In general, I have difficulty with my computer speed. I would recommend for next class, everyone should have a higher RAM and Space for their computer in order to work on this animation software. I don't have much an error which sometime i do but have a missing file, so I found a tutorial that fix this problem, so please check out this video below here.

Video Critique 9

This looks pretty good, but it looks mechanical. I think he/she could make this seem more fluid if he/she could figure out a way to make things happen together. Right now, it seems like each element happens one after the other...maybe he/she could make the animations overlap a little more. Maybe you could add a slight bulge or turbulent displace to the people hold hands as it zooms in. Adding slight distortions to effects makes them appear more fluid.

Video Critique 8

The Hit List title sequence

Alignment of the type is really bothering me, I don't know it might be a style of a designer. And the other hand, the floating image is kinda awkward from opposite direction, and the timing is slow, i would make everyday go slightly a little faster.

Video Critique 7

Nicely done with the design. The only thing that I'd criticize is that the whole thing moves a little too fast. You don't really get time to absorb the image and the name. Otherwise it was great. Timing is the tool...

Video Critique 6

Title Sequence from Lami Okrekson on Vimeo.

The white golf ball substitute with the "i" letter is nice, however isn't that golf ball should be move down a little to read as "i"? And on frame 0:11 the golf ball is kinda "suck" or "float" there on the screen without interact anything with the type while other shots are interacting with typography.

Video Critique 5

Title Sequence from Rebecca Olsson on Vimeo.

The white typography is really good, however it lost the readability and legibility after it switch the dark background to a lighter background, it's hard to read the white type on a light background. I would change the type color to a little bit darker if there is light background switch in. And another issue is that the flower is kinda floating in instead of growing, i would love to see it growing from the bottom instead of floating from side to side, bottom to the upper screen.

Video Critique 4

Title Sequence from Marija Vidanovic on Vimeo.

The simplicity of this video is nicely done, however there is a bit issue on the way he/she handle the type that appear beneath the hand. I would not see it edge when the hand cover, then when the hand move out, it reveals the type right away.