Ocean's 11 Opening Credit

Ocean's 11 test 1 from Sony Kim on Vimeo.

Video Critique 2

Title Sequence For Chicago Movie from Anita Kolop on Vimeo.


The letter C using as an earring is cool, but the type zoom out with ugly drop shadow. I would get rid of the drop shadow. And the scale of the letter C is really big compare to the rest of the letter, "Chicago" I would scale it down as the same side as the rest of the letters.
This animation showing the pieces of red leg and head in a weird transition.
At 37 second,  the lock just pop up randomly, i would find a better transition than this. The spot light usually running around while in this shot at 39 second, the spot light isn't move anywhere, which is awkward compare to the other shot. 

The microphone look similar like a comb, doesn't read as microphone clearly.
And the last slide is the issue of the "film" that is rotating in a slow and weird angle.

Video Critique

the conformist opening titles / credits from ethan feuer on Vimeo.





 This title sequence is nicely done, however I think the type that reveal in white overlapping the dripping blood is hard to read. It should have been move those type to the other side of the blood being drop. Another problem is when they try to using a shot of glass of water that has blood in it, they shouldn't used it as a transparency overlap the shot that they try to reveal the pomegranate. It should be either take it out or reveal it more clearly not to blend together make viewer confuse to what to see.