Video Critique

the conformist opening titles / credits from ethan feuer on Vimeo.





 This title sequence is nicely done, however I think the type that reveal in white overlapping the dripping blood is hard to read. It should have been move those type to the other side of the blood being drop. Another problem is when they try to using a shot of glass of water that has blood in it, they shouldn't used it as a transparency overlap the shot that they try to reveal the pomegranate. It should be either take it out or reveal it more clearly not to blend together make viewer confuse to what to see.